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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Hi Bill,</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">A few more editorial comments:</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Page 2 and beyond - the revision Date
(June 20, 2010) at the righ upper corner of each page is wrong.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Section 5.3.1.4</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 434: I thought we agreed that all
"Service" should be changed to <service>?</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 442: "Resource" is mispelled.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Section 5.3.2.2</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Lines 473, 479, 481, 484, 485, 489,
490, 494: "Service" should be changed to <service>?</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Section 5.3.3</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 501: change "PhysicalDocument
TicketDocument Ticket" to "Physical Document Ticket"</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 502: change "PhysicalJob Ticket"
to "Physical Job Ticket "</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 514: change "</font><font size=2 face="Arial">PhysicalJob
Ticket" to "Physicalb Job Ticket".</font>
<br><font size=2 face="Arial">Line 515: same change as Line 514.</font>
<br><font size=2 face="Arial">Line 519: remove duplicated "and"
and duplicated "Document Ticket"</font>
<br><font size=2 face="Arial">Line 524: change "Physical Document
TicketDocument Ticket" to "Physical Document Ticket"</font>
<br><font size=2 face="Arial">Line 525: remove dulplicated "Document
Ticket"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Section 5.3.4.1</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 541: extra '.' preceeding "Document"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Section 5.3.4.3</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 551: "local client" should
be capitalized</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 554: "User Client" should
be "Local Client"</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 560: change "Job TicketDefault
Job Ticket" to "Default Job Ticket"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Section 9</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Lines 684-685: change the color of text
to black.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Regards,</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Nancy</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><br>
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Nancy Chen, PWG Vice-Chair<br>
Principal Engineer<br>
Solutions and Technology<br>
Oki Data<br>
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.<br>
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054<br>
Phone: (856)222-7006<br>
Email: Nancy.Chen@okidata.com</font>
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<td width=40%><font size=1 face="sans-serif"><b>"William Wagner"
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<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Sent by: mfd-bounces@pwg.org</font>
<p><font size=1 face="sans-serif">07/20/2010 10:21 AM</font>
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<div align=right><font size=1 face="sans-serif">To</font></div>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call
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<br><tt><font size=2>The updated MFD Modeling Requirements document reflecting
the comments at<br>
last Thursday's call is at:<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>The updated document is accessible at:<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/lcrc-mfdreq10-20100720.pdf<br>
</font></tt>
<br><tt><font size=2>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/lcrc-mfdreq10-20100720-rev.doc<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>I suggest that the un-redlined copy be reviewed.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>I will update the text comments resolution later.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Thanks.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Bill Wagner<br>
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