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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">All,</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Here are my comments:</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>1. Terminology</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">(1) Add <service> to the list
of terms defined in the "Overall" document Terminology section.</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">(2) Remove all XML element names - they
are not terminolgies. </font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">(3) Some terms listed in Terminology
are never used in the spec, should be removed. Some are listed as being
defined in the "Overall" document, but never be capitalized in
the spec. Please fix.</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"> CopyDevice,
Attributes, CrossFeed direction, Element, Feed direction, Group Element,
Hardcopy Document, Job Ticket, Local Client,
PhysicalCopyJobTicket, Remote Client, Scan Device, Scan Region,
Sequence, Slow Scan Direction, Template, Users, X, Y.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 6, </b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 263 -</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">"The PWG Semantic Model" mentioned
here is very confusing. If it's PWG Semantic Model v1.0 which only has
semantics for Print Service, it does not have semantics for Copy Service.
Currently there is no newer PWG Semantic Model spec that covers all MFD
services yet. I think it's better to replace it with "MFD System".</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 269 - "printoing" should
be "printing", a typo</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 289 - "Copy" : should
be "copy job"</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 290 - remove a duplicated "that"
from "that that"</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 294 - "Each job has exactly
zero document." : please provide the rationale for this statement,
or reference the section where the rationale is provided.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 6.1</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 308 - "CopyServer" :
should be "CopyService"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 7.2</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 422 - "provide" should
be "provides"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 7.3.1</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 449 - "set" should be
"sets"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 7.3.3</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 488-489 - Elements of CopyJobProcessing
that are outside the yellow box are said taken from PrintJobProcessing
and are described in the MFD Overall document, but such descriptions do
not exist in the Overall document yet.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 9</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 511 - "ar" should be
"are"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 10.2.1</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 540 - "</font><font size=2 face="Arial">Conforming
implementations MUST implement "all" of the model objects as
defined in this specification in the indicated sections</font><font size=2 face="sans-serif">"
: but not all are MANDATORY according to the Schema!!! </font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Security Consideration Section</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">I have recommended some general security
considerations for all services in MFD Requirements document. Please reference
that document for common security considerations.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 13.1</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Depending on MFD's local security site
policy, encryption of the internal digital document might not be required.
For example, for copying a section of book or magzine in a public library,
does a public library normally require the internal digital doument be
encrypted?</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><b>Section 13.2</b></font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">I suggest to add at the beginning: "The
design of Copy Service should include access control to Copy Service operations
in accordance with the local site security policy."</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Regards,</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Nancy<br>
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Nancy Chen<br>
Principal Engineer<br>
Solutions and Technology<br>
Oki Data<br>
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.<br>
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054<br>
Phone: (856)222-7006<br>
Email: Nancy.Chen@okidata.com</font>
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<td width=40%><font size=1 face="sans-serif"><b>"Zehler, Peter"
<Peter.Zehler@xerox.com></b> </font>
<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Sent by: mfd-bounces@pwg.org</font>
<p><font size=1 face="sans-serif">07/13/2010 11:27 AM</font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">[MFD] {Disarmed} RE: Copy Service Working
Group Last Call</font></table>
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<br><tt><font size=2>The MFD Working Group Last Call for this specification
ends on Friday.<br>
Please send any comment you may have.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Peter Zehler<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Xerox Research Center Webster<br>
Email: Peter.Zehler@Xerox.com<br>
Voice: (585) 265-8755<br>
FAX: (585) 265-7441<br>
US Mail: Peter Zehler<br>
Xerox Corp.<br>
800 Phillips Rd.<br>
M/S 128-25E<br>
Webster NY, 14580-9701<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>From: Zehler, Peter<br>
Sent: Friday, July 02, 2010 1:53 PM<br>
To: 'mfd@pwg.org'<br>
Subject: Copy Service Working Group Last Call<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>All,<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>This is the announcement for MFD Working Group Last
Call for the "Copy<br>
Service Semantic Model and Service Interface" specification. (Only
minor<br>
changes have been made based on comments from the last Face to Face.<br>
See the "-rev" version.) The Last Call will end at the
close of<br>
business July 16. At the upcoming PWG Face to Face we will review the<br>
resolution to the Last Call comments during the MFD session. At
that<br>
point the specification should be ready for Formal Vote pending approval<br>
of the MFD Overall specification.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Please review the specification listed below and send
comments to the<br>
MFD reflector <mailto:mfd at pwg.org<br>
<https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/mfd> > and cc me in<br>
<mailto:Peter.Zehler at Xerox.com<br>
<https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/mfd> >. I will collect the<br>
comments for subsequent resolution at teleconferences prior to the face<br>
to face meeting.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>The Last Call version of the "Copy Service Semantic
Model and Service<br>
Interface" specification is now available at:<br>
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdcopymodel10-20100701.pdf</font></tt>
<br><tt><font size=2>(As usual the .docx version as well as -rev.pdf and
-rev.docx are<br>
available in the same directory.)<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Thanks,<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Pete<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Peter Zehler<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Xerox Research Center Webster<br>
Email: Peter.Zehler@Xerox.com<br>
Voice: (585) 265-8755<br>
FAX: (585) 265-7441<br>
US Mail: Peter Zehler<br>
Xerox Corp.<br>
800 Phillips Rd.<br>
M/S 128-25E<br>
Webster NY, 14580-9701<br>
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