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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>1.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Insert
before terminology table:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Note:
The definitions below contain common definitions for service qualified
terms. The ‘<service>’ in the definitions below can be
replaced with ‘Copy”, ‘EmailIn’,
‘EmailOut’, ‘FaxIn’, ‘FaxOut’,
‘Print’, ‘Scan’, ‘Transform’ or
‘Resource’ when the term is used in the individual Service
document.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:5.25pt'><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line
393:</span><service> Document - A data object, created and managed by a
Service, that contains the description, processing, and status information of a
document submitted by a user. A document object is bound to a single Job.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line
393:</span>In definition for <service> Document Data: Change
“above” to “below”<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>4.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line
393:</span>Fix <service> Region definition<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>5.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line
393:</span>CrossFeed direction: fix ‘)’<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>6.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line
393:</span>Digital Document: rework a bit to make service names consistent,
remove superfluous “Document.”, and include cross reference
to diagram or remove reference.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>7.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line
393:</span>ICC Profile: “(L*a*b*)” ???<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>8.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line
393:</span>Image: replace ‘14’ with ‘e’<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>9.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'>
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line
393:</span>MFD Service: Is this a generic definition for any of the
defined service types (<span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Copy,
EmailIn, EmailOut, FaxIn, FaxOut, Print, Scan, Transform or Resource) or the
definition for the service to manage the MFD as a whole?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>10.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line 393:Scan
Document: delete since it is already covered by <service> Document<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>11.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Figure 1:
Shouldn’t SystemConfiguration and SystemDescription be made mandatory in
the model?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>12.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Figure 2: tone down
the blue background to make printed document easier on the eyes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>13.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>492-493: Change “The
Job Ticket DocumentProcessing instructions apply to all documents within the
job unless overridden at the document level with a DocumentTicket” to “The
DocumentProcessing instructions contained in the Job Ticket apply to all
documents within the job unless overridden at the document level with DocumentProcessing
instructions in the DocumentTicket”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l6 level1 lfo8'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>14.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Figure 3: Use <<a
href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/white/ImagingSystem.png">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/white/ImagingSystem.png</a>>
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Impact","sans-serif";color:navy'>Peter
Zehler</span><br>
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<span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:navy'>Xerox
Research Center Webster<br>
</span><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";
color:navy'>Email: <a href="mailto:Peter.Zehler@Xerox.com">Peter.Zehler@Xerox.com</a></span><br>
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(585) 265-8755</span><br>
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(585) 265-7441</span><br>
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<span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";color:navy'>Xerox
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