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<p class="MsoNormal">Correction on section 6.1.1 comment below. I mis-read those lines – they do make sense - so that comment is retracted.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Chris<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Christopher Rizzo</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Engineer II, Software Engineering<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Xerox Corporation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Christopher Rizzo <christopher.rizzo@xerox.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, January 4, 2024 at 10:24 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>PWG Workgroup <ipp@pwg.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards)" <smith.kennedy@hp.com><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [IPP] Updated draft of IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 posted ready for Formal Vote<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Some comments/questions:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Use case figures mention “Job ticket”. I presume “Job ticket” refers to a initial value/default job object that is used to create all jobs with defaults? Is there a spec where this concept is defined? Should there be a reference to that
here? It appears that job ticket is an abstract (or phantom) object (ie – an object that does not really exist until a concrete operation is received) and gets updated based user authentication state?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Section 3.2.8 Description paragraph seems to imply Duncan has permission to print in color, yet Figure 3 shows Duncan does not have permission. Is there a different between Duncan’s “office user account” and his “personal account” – is
this why Figure 3 shows he cannot print in color – I cannot tell if there are 2 different accounts in play here.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Section 4.2.1 Job Proof and Suspend 2<sup>nd</sup> paragraph line 629-630 – Error! Reference source not found<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Section 6.1.1 – Line 815-816 - Is it possible a printer that can support Job Release but not support job-release-action = job-password? These lines seem to imply job-password is always required when Job Release (Action) is supported. But
I’m not seeing this requirement in the 10.1.1 Printer Conformance section.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Chris<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Christopher Rizzo</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Segoe UI",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Engineer II, Software Engineering<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Design & Development Engineering<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Xerox Corporation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">26600 SW Parkway Ave<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Wilsonville, OR 97070<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">ipp <ipp-bounces@pwg.org> on behalf of PWG Workgroup <ipp@pwg.org><br>
<b>Reply-To: </b>PWG Workgroup <ipp@pwg.org><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, January 2, 2024 at 9:31 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>PWG Workgroup <ipp@pwg.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards)" <smith.kennedy@hp.com><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[IPP] Updated draft of IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 posted ready for Formal Vote<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Greetings, <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I've posted an update to IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 in preparation for its Formal Approval vote. The new draft is here:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20240102.pdf">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20240102.pdf</a> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20240102.docx">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20240102.docx</a> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20240102-rev.pdf">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20240102-rev.pdf</a> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20240102-rev.docx">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20240102-rev.docx</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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Normalized the use case descriptions in section 3.2 to use lower case "job" and "printer"; and<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">
Changed instances of "workgroup printer" to "printer" in the use cases and made some other minor editorial changes to the use cases to make them read better.<o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Happy new year!<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Smith<br>
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Smith Kennedy<br>
HP Inc.<br>
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