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<div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On Dec 19, 2022, at 5:13 PM, Benjamin Gordon <bmgordon@chromium.org> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div>
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<div>Sorry about the slow review. Just a few minor editorial comments:</div>
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<div>Section 1:</div>
line 381: depends -> depend for grammatical agreement with "client modules"
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<div>Section 5.1:</div>
<div>line 899: It seems like a phrase is missing to explain when the printer must reject the operation. Should it include something like "When the operation is not allowed for a security reason" similar to PWG 5100.13-2012?</div>
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<div>Section 6.1.4:</div>
<div>line 1075: implemneting -> implementing</div>
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<div>line 1131: Some words seem to be missing before "expand the Impression".</div>
<div>lines 1134/1138: The two figures have the same caption. Should they mention "extend" and "scale" to help the reader see which method each illustrates?</div>
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<div>Section 12.1.1:</div>
<div>line 2517: extra "he" in "the he" at the end of the line</div>
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<div>Thanks,</div>
<div>Benjamin</div>
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