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Thanks for the feedback, Benjamin! I appreciate your careful reading.<br>
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<blockquote type="cite">On Nov 4, 2022, at 3:29 PM, Benjamin Gordon <bmgordon@chromium.org> wrote:<br>
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<div>Page 16 step 2 says the printer MUST implement a deprecated attribute<br>
(presentation-direction-number-up). If there's a replacement, should<br>
that be mentioned here and/or 5.2.16? If there's not a replacement<br>
and the printer is required to implement it, is this really<br>
deprecated?<br>
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Page 26 line 649: Double period after "ignore the request"<br>
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Page 26 <a href="http://5.2.5.2">
5.2.5.2</a> and <a href="http://5.2.5.3">
5.2.5.3</a> media and media-col are both listed as<br>
required but are also mutually exclusive. Should they have language<br>
saying "media is CONDITIONALLY REQUIRED if media-col is not supplied"<br>
and vice versa?<br>
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Page 27 <a href="http://5.2.6.2">
5.2.6.2</a> and <a href="http://5.2.6.3">
5.2.6.3</a> media and media-col are both listed as<br>
required but are also mutually exclusive.<br>
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Page 29 <a href="http://5.2.9.3">
5.2.9.3</a> and <a href="http://5.2.9.4">
5.2.9.4</a> media and media-col are both listed as<br>
required but are also mutually exclusive.<br>
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Page 31 5.2.16 presentation-direction-number-up is deprecated, but<br>
there is no indication of what clients should use instead.<br>
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Page 34 <a href="http://5.2.17.2">
5.2.17.2</a> and <a href="http://5.2.17.3">
5.2.17.3</a> media and media-col are both listed as<br>
required but are also mutually exclusive.<br>
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Thanks,<br>
Benjamin<br>
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