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Mike,</div>
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I am not officially a member of IPP but I thought I would do a quick review of the draft for you. Here are some comments:</div>
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<li><span>The <span style="font-size:11.0pt; line-height:107%; font-family:"Cambria",serif">
IEEE Standards Association </span>link on line 41 does not work.</span></li><li><span>The link associated with the <span style="font-size:11.0pt; line-height:107%; font-family:"Cambria",serif">
PWG5100.3</span> entry in Section 10.1 is not to PWG5100.3 standard; it is to IPP Production Printing Extensions v2.0.</span></li><li><span>The link asociated with the PWG5100.11 entry in Section 10.1 is not to the PWG5100.11 Standard; it is to IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0.</span></li><li><span>The "<span style="font-size:11.0pt; line-height:107%; font-family:"Cambria",serif"><a href="http://www.pwg.org/ipp/" id="LPlnk730393" fg_scanned="1">http://www.pwg.org/ipp/</a></span>" link in Section 12 on page 29 isn't a hyperlink.</span></li><li><span>Section 9.1 references PWG5100.12, but it is not included in the list of references in Section 10.</span></li></ol>
<div>Alan<br>
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<div id="divRplyFwdMsg" dir="ltr"><font style="font-size:11pt" face="Calibri, sans-serif" color="#000000"><b>From:</b> ipp <ipp-bounces@pwg.org> on behalf of Michael Sweet via ipp <ipp@pwg.org><br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, February 11, 2021 8:41 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> PWG IPP Workgroup <ipp@pwg.org><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [IPP] Initial draft of IPP/2.0 update posted</font>
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<div class="PlainText">All,<br>
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I have posted an initial draft of the update to PWG 5100.12-2015 (IPP Versions 2.0, 2.1, and 2.2) to:<br>
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<a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211.docx" fg_scanned="1">
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211.docx</a><br>
<a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211.pdf">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211.pdf</a><br>
<a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211-rev.pdf">
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211-rev.pdf</a><br>
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Michael Sweet<br>
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