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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Thanks Ira! I've saved your file to incorporate it into the next revision. I'll let you know if I have any questions.<div class=""> <br class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Dec 21, 2020, at 10:41 AM, Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=""><div class="">Hi Smith,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Thanks for uploading the correct clean draft to the FTP site.<br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Attached is your latest "-rev" MS Word version with all of the necessary IETF RFC references added<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class=""></div><div class="">(or corrected) and the US NIST FIPS references added. I also added a few informative MS Word</div><div class="">comments for your use (please read them). I updated the Normative and Informative References</div><div class="">sections accordingly.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Cheers,</div><div class="">- Ira</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><i class=""><font size="1" class="">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)</font></i></div><div class=""><i class=""><font size="1" class="">Chair - SAE Trust Anchors and Authentication TF<br class=""></font></i></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><i class=""><font size="1" class="">Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG</font></i></div><div class=""><i class=""><font size="1" class="">Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG<br class=""></font></i></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><i class=""><font size="1" class="">Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br class="">Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br class="">Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br class="">IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br class="">Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br class=""><a href="http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(51, 51, 255);" class="">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</a><br class=""><a href="http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc" target="_blank" style="color: rgb(102, 0, 204);" class="">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</a><br class="">mailto:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br class="">(permanent) PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434</font></i></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br class=""></div></div><br style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=""><div class="gmail_quote" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, Dec 21, 2020 at 12:19 PM Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards) <<a href="mailto:smith.kennedy@hp.com" class="">smith.kennedy@hp.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin: 0px 0px 0px 0.8ex; border-left-width: 1px; border-left-style: solid; border-left-color: rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left: 1ex;"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;" class="">Hi Ira,<br class=""><div class=""><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Dec 21, 2020, at 9:31 AM, Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">I downloaded the MS Word source "wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" just now. My</div><div class="">copy of MS Word 2019 cannot open it - says it contains "unreadable" content and</div><div class="">suggests a recovery attempt - I didn't try it. <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">OTOH, the MS Word source "wd-ippepx20-20201029-rev.docx" does open OK</div><div class="">without warnings.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I'm not sure what version of MS Word you're using or what OS platform. But the</div><div class="">source of the eventual published version needs to be stable and readable for</div><div class="">future maintenance.</div></div></div></blockquote><br class=""></div><div class="">My local copy opens without complain on both macOS and Windows 10, but the one on the FTP site is broken. I am not sure why the upload got messed up but the SHA256 hashes of my local copy of "wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" and the one on the FTP site don't match. I just pushed up a new copy and it loads as expected - try again:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx</a></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><br class=""></div></blockquote></div><span id="cid:f_kiyuhqd00"><wd-ippepx20-20201029-rev-ira.docx></span></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></body></html>