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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Hello All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">I have editorial comments on IPP System Service v1.0 :<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Page 177 – 182: Formatting of Section “<b>18. Change History</b>” Is messed up at multiple places.
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It is messed up at the source (Word Document) and carried over to the PDF version.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol;color:#1F497D"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Line 4928 – 4963 : Larger font and larger line spacing compared to the rest of “Change History”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Line 5007 – 5009 : Line 5007 got broken into 3 lines (5007, 5008, 5009 should be 1 line)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Line 5068 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red">14 February
2018</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">” should be “<b>February 14, 2018</b>”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Line 5081 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red">12 January
2018</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">” should be “<b>January 12, 2018</b>”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Line 5088 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red">17 November
2017</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">” should be “<b>November 17, 2017</b>”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Line 5102 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:red">13 November
2017</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">” should be “<b>November 13, 2017</b>”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Line 5103 – 5122 : Bulleting, indentation and word spacing got messed up.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Best Regards,<br>
Cihan Colakoglu<br>
Kyocera Document Solutions<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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