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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Sep 11, 2019, at 8:52 AM, Sukert, Alan <<a href="mailto:Alan.Sukert@xerox.com" class="">Alan.Sukert@xerox.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">The following are my comments against IPP System Service v1.0:<o:p class=""></o:p></div><ol start="1" type="1" style="margin-bottom: 0in; margin-top: 0in;" class=""><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The [ACPI] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the document.<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The [DSP1027] reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the document.<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The [<span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">IEEE1284]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the document.<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The [<span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">IEEE1621]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the document.<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The [<span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">ISO10175-1]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the document.<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The [<span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">PWG5100.1]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the document. The text does reference [<span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">PWG5100.11], so I wonder if the reference in 15.1 is incorrect.</span></span><o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The [<span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">PWG5107.2]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the document. Also, the associated link for this reference in 15.1 does not work.<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The [<span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">STD66]<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>reference in 15.1 does not appear elsewhere in the document.<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">For the [STD92] reference in 15.1, the link may be to the proper document but it doesn’t track with the title in 15.1. 15.1 lists<span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">"Internet Printing Protocol/1.1", STD 92, June 2018” but the document the link points to has “</span></span><b class=""><span style="" class="">Internet Printing Protocol/1.1: Encoding and Transport”, is dated January 2017 and is not labeled STD92.</span></b><o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">[ISO10646] is mentioned in Section 12 but is not listed in any of the reference sections in 15.<o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><span style="" class="">[PWG5100.SYS] is mentioned in Section 14 but is not listed in any of the reference sections in 15.</span><o:p class=""></o:p></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Not sure this is an issue or not, but I couldn’t reach the link for the<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">[REJUVENATION] reference in 15.2.</span></span><span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: windowtext;" class=""><o:p class=""></o:p></span></span></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">This one is a nit – For the<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">[UNISECFAQ] reference in 15.2, the title in 15.2 says “Unicode Consortium “Unicode Security FAQ”, November2016” but the actual title in the referenced link is “Unicode Consortium “Unicode Security Issues FAQ”, November2016”.</span></span><span class="fontstyle01" style="font-family: ArialMT; font-weight: normal; font-style: normal;"><span style="font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: windowtext;" class=""><o:p class=""></o:p></span></span></li><li class="MsoPlainText" style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt -0.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">This may be OK, but in 2.4 on line 517 the<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/rpp1CADo5oTNqGL5muGUOLZ?domain=iso.org" style="color: rgb(149, 79, 114); text-decoration: underline;" class=""><span style="color: windowtext;" class="">https://www.iso.org/standard/18191.html</span></a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>link takes you to<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><b class=""><span style="letter-spacing: -0.75pt;" class="">ISO/IEC 10175-1:1996</span></b><span style="letter-spacing: -0.75pt;" class="">. Is that the document you wanted to point to here?</span><o:p class=""></o:p></li></ol><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">I checked all the references in Section 15 but didn’t check if all the references in the body of the document were listed in Section 15; I will try to do that later if I can get some spare time.<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;" class="">Alan Sukert<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;" class="">Product Security Specialist<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;" class="">Xerox Research and Development/</span><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;" class="">Product Security and Development Process Controls<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 176, 80);" class="">Xerox Certified Green Belt<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><a href="mailto:Alan.Sukert@xerox.com%7C" style="color: rgb(149, 79, 114); text-decoration: underline;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: blue;" class="">Alan.Sukert@xerox.com|</span></a><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;" class=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>tel 585.427.1413<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Arial, sans-serif;" class="">MS 0111-03A | 800 Phillips Road | Webster, NY 14580 USA</span></div></div></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></div></body></html>