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<div dir="ltr"><div>Thanks Alan!</div><div><br></div><div><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG</div><div>Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG<br></div><div dir="ltr">Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br>IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br>Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br><a style="color:rgb(51,51,255)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</a><br><a style="color:rgb(102,0,204)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</a><br>mailto: <a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br>PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434<br><br><div style="display:inline"></div><div style="display:inline"></div><div style="display:inline"></div><div></div><div></div><div></div><div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, Jun 17, 2019 at 3:17 PM Sukert, Alan <<a href="mailto:Alan.Sukert@xerox.com">Alan.Sukert@xerox.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
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<li>Page 22, Section 4.4.2, Line 708 -- 'The following attributes are part of a Close-Job response' should read ' The following attributes are part of a Resubmit-Job response'.</li><li>Page 38, Section 5.5.1, Lines 1144 & 1155 -- This section reads “This DEPRECATED attribute lists the supported member attributes of the "document-format-details" operation (section 5.1.1) and Document/Job Status (section 5.2.1) attributes”. document-format-details
is in Section 5.2.1 and Document/Job Status would be Section 5.2.</li><li>Page 39, Section 5.5.11, Line 1177 -- "job-cancel-after" is in Section 5.4.3, not 5.4.1.</li><li>Page 40 – Several sections on this page referenced ‘Section (N.M.P)’. It is not clear what this is a section reference to.</li><li>Page 45, Section 5.5.39, Line 1361 – Reference to Section 5.3.1.6 should be to Section 5.3.1.7 and “media-hold-count" I believe should be media-hole-count".</li><li>Page 45, Section 5.5.43, Line 1376 – Reference to Section 5.3.1.5 should be to Section 5.3.1.12.</li><li>Page 45, Section 5.5.46, Line 1387 – Reference to Section 5.3.1.12 should be to Section 5.3.1.15.</li><li>Page 46, Section 5.5.51, Line 1406 – Reference to Section 5.3.1.21 should be to Section 5.3.1.22.</li><li>Page 46, Section 5.5.53, Line 1414 – Reference to Section 5.3.1 should be to Section 5.3.2.</li><li>Page 48, Section 6.4, Line 1460 – Reference to Section 5.1.1 should be to Section 5.1.2.</li></ol>
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<div>Alan Sukert</div>
<div>Product Security Specialist</div>
<div>Xerox Research and Development/ Product Security and Development Process Controls</div>
<div>Xerox Certified Green Belt </div>
<div><a href="mailto:Alan.Sukert@xerox.com" target="_blank">Alan.Sukert@xerox.com</a>| tel 585.427.1413</div>
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From: pwg-announce <<a href="mailto:pwg-announce-bounces@pwg.org" target="_blank">pwg-announce-bounces@pwg.org</a>> On Behalf Of Michael Sweet via pwg-announce<br>
Sent: Friday, May 24, 2019 2:08 PM<br>
To: PWG Announcements <<a href="mailto:pwg-announce@pwg.org" target="_blank">pwg-announce@pwg.org</a>><br>
Subject: [PWG-Announce] PWG Last Call: IPP Job Extensions v2.0 (JOBEXT) (Ends June 21, 2019)</div>
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<div>[This PWG Last Call starts today, May 24, 2019 and ends Friday, June 21, 2019 at 10pm US Pacific time.]</div>
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<div>Hi,</div>
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<div>This is the formal announcement of the IPP Job Extensions v2.0 (JOBEXT) specification, located at:</div>
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<div> <a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobext20-20190524.pdf" target="_blank">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobext20-20190524.pdf</a></div>
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<div>The IPP WG has completed extensive review of the various revisions of this document and a workgroup last call.</div>
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<div>The PWG Process/3.0 requires that a quorum of PWG members (30% or 8 members) must acknowledge a PWG Last Call (with or without comments), before any document can progress to PWG Formal Vote. This PWG Last Call is NOT a Formal Vote but it DOES require
your review acknowledgment. The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is located at:</div>
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<div> <a href="https://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf" target="_blank">https://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf</a></div>
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<div>HOW TO RESPOND</div>
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<div>Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:</div>
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<div> Subject: <Company Name> has reviewed the IPP Job Extensions v2.0 and has [no] comments</div>
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<div>WHERE TO SEND YOUR RESPONSE</div>
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<div>Please do NOT simply reply to this note on the PWG-Announce list.</div>
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<div>Please send your response to *all* of the following email addresses:</div>
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<div> ipp at <a href="http://pwg.org" target="_blank">pwg.org</a> (IPP WG mailing list - you must be subscribed!);</div>
<div> smith.kennedy at <a href="http://hp.com" target="_blank">hp.com</a> (Smith Kennedy, PWG Chair)</div>
<div> blueroofmusic at <a href="http://gmail.com" target="_blank">gmail.com</a> (Ira McDonald, PWG Secretary, IPP WG Co-Chair)</div>
<div> ptykodi at <a href="http://tykodi.com" target="_blank">tykodi.com</a> (Paul Tykodi, IPP WG Co-Chair)</div>
<div> msweet at <a href="http://msweet.org" target="_blank">msweet.org</a> (Mike Sweet, IPP WG Secretary, IPP Job Extensions v2.0 editor)</div>
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<div>Note: You must be subscribed to the IPP WG mailing list to send email to that list - otherwise your email will be silently discarded. You can subscribe to this list at:</div>
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