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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Hi Chris,<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">[I dropped pwg-announce on this reply.]</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">The link for the document we are reviewing is:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf</a> </div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I just downloaded that and there are no redlines. Is this the URL you are reviewing? I'm not seeing any of the issues you are seeing in this document edition.</div><div class=""><br class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Apr 25, 2019, at 1:00 PM, Rizzo, Christopher <<a href="mailto:Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com" class="">Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Reviewed the marked up version, not sure how/where to get the unmarked version. Most of these comments are trivial grammar/syntax and<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Lines 229-230 on page 17 define a section 4 that has no content. Was this supposed to be bullet 2 in section 3.7?<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Line 231 has an apparently unnecessary page break, causing most of page 17 to be blank, or is this just a markup view issue? Same for page 20 and 21.<span style="font-size: 12pt;" class=""><o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Line 249: "system system"<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Note other issues that I can see.<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Xerox Approves (do I need to sent that in separate note?<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">Christopher Rizzo<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">Xerox Corporation<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">GDG/Discovery/Advance Technology<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">26600 SW Parkway Ave.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">Wilsonville, OR 97070-9251<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">Phone: (585) 314-6936<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">Email:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com</a><o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">"The realization came over me with full force that a good part of the remainder of my life was going to be spent in finding errors in my own programs."<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><span style="font-size: 10.5pt;" class="">-Maurice Wilkes,<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><i class="">Memoirs of a Computer Pioneer</i></span><o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="border-style: solid none none; border-top-width: 1pt; border-top-color: rgb(181, 196, 223); padding: 3pt 0in 0in;" class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><b class=""><span style="font-size: 12pt;" class="">From:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b><span style="font-size: 12pt;" class="">ipp <<a href="mailto:ipp-bounces@pwg.org" class="">ipp-bounces@pwg.org</a>> on behalf of PWG Workgroup <<a href="mailto:ipp@pwg.org" class="">ipp@pwg.org</a>><br class=""><b class="">Reply-To:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>"Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect)" <<a href="mailto:smith.kennedy@hp.com" class="">smith.kennedy@hp.com</a>><br class=""><b class="">Date:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Tuesday, April 23, 2019 at 2:14 PM<br class=""><b class="">To:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>"<a href="mailto:pwg-announce@pwg.org" class="">pwg-announce@pwg.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:pwg-announce@pwg.org" class="">pwg-announce@pwg.org</a>>, PWG Workgroup <<a href="mailto:ipp@pwg.org" class="">ipp@pwg.org</a>><br class=""><b class="">Subject:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Re: [IPP] PWG Last Call: IPP Authentication Methods (Ends 11 May 2019)<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Greetings all,<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><o:p class=""></o:p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Please DO contribute your response to this Last Call at the point when you have completed your review, since it assists us in achieving quorum, which is important for advancing it to completion and publication!<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">The PWG thanks you for your time and contribution!<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Smith<br class=""><br class="">/**<br class=""> Smith Kennedy<br class=""> Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group<br class=""> HP Inc.<br class="">*/<o:p class=""></o:p></p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><br class=""><br class=""><o:p class=""></o:p></div><blockquote style="margin-top: 5pt; margin-bottom: 5pt;" class="" type="cite"><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">On Apr 19, 2019, at 11:04 AM, Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div class=""><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">[corrected typo in Subject line - ends 11 May as per body of original message]<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Hi,<br class=""><br class="">[This PWG Last Call starts today, 11 April 2019, and ends Thursday, 11 May 2019 at 10pm US Pacific time.]<br class=""><br class="">This is the formal announcement of the IPP Authentication Methods best practice document, located at:<br class=""><br class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/ZVqbC2kr5rfMZzyzSnvHV9?domain=ftp.pwg.org" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf</a><br class=""><br class="">The IPP WG has completed extensive review of the various revisions of this document and two IPP WG last calls. The PWG has completed one last<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">call and all of the comments have been resolved in this new version.<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><br class="">The PWG Process/3.0 requires that a quorum of PWG members (30% or 8 members*) must acknowledge a PWG Last Call (with or without comments), before any document can progress to PWG Formal Vote. This PWG Last Call is NOT a Formal Vote but it DOES require your review acknowledgment. The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is located at:<br class=""><br class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/ThT7C31v5vin9zNztqad3u?domain=pwg.org" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">https://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf</a><o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">* Many thanks to Google for becoming a PWG member!<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><br class="">HOW TO RESPOND<br class=""><br class="">Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:<br class=""><br class=""> Subject: <Company Name> has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has [no] comments<br class=""><br class=""><br class="">WHERE TO SEND YOUR RESPONSE<br class=""><br class="">Please do NOT simply reply to this note on the PWG-Announce list.<br class=""><br class="">Please send your response to *all* of the following email addresses:<br class=""><br class=""> ipp at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/8wKgC4xw7wuX9KkKiBV_kF?domain=pwg.org" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">pwg.org</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(IPP WG mailing list - you must be subscribed!);<br class=""> smith.kennedy at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/hvOoC5yx5xsBpLNLC2Nbti?domain=hp.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">hp.com</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(Smith Kennedy, PWG Chair, IPP Authentication Methods editor)<br class=""> blueroofmusic at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/N2vjC68y5yI50YwYCxwTcx?domain=gmail.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">gmail.com</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(Ira McDonald, PWG Secretary, IPP WG Co-Chair)<br class=""> ptykod at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/eUeeC73z5zuDV171HRQemg?domain=tykodi.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">tykodi.com</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(Paul Tykodi, IPP WG Co-Chair)<br class=""> msweet at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/OaxvC82A5AhoPp4pizWy5i?domain=apple.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">apple.com</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(Mike Sweet, IPP WG Secretary)<br class=""><br class="">Note: You must be subscribed to the IPP WG mailing list to send email to that list - otherwise your email will be silently discarded. You can subscribe to this list at:<br class=""><br class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/QDT2C9rB5BFGNE7ESZ0Ak8?domain=pwg.org" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/ipp</a><o:p class=""></o:p></div><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Cheers,<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">- Ira (PWG Secretary, IPP WG Co-chair)<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br class="">Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG<o:p class=""></o:p></div></div><div class=""><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br class="">Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br class="">Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br class="">IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br class="">Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br class=""><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/1TbEC0Rp6ps1gwPwUo9S74?domain=sites.google.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class=""><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 255);" class="">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</span></a><br class=""><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/l89kCgJKgKTMwZQZS68T5T?domain=sites.google.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class=""><span style="color: rgb(102, 0, 204);" class="">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</span></a><br class="">mailto:<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline;" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br class="">PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434</p></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote></div></div></div></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></body></html>