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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Smith,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The link I clicked was from today's meeting announce: <a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190304-rev.pdf">
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190304-rev.pdf</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">And of course, after I said I could not find the unmarked up copy, I realized the link to the unmarked copy was in the document itself:
<a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190304.pdf">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190304.pdf</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I still see lin 211 "system system", even in the 0328 version.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">No other issues.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Christopher Rizzo<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Xerox Corporation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Phone: (585) 314-6936<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">Email: Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">"The realization came over me with full force that a good part of the remainder of my life was going to be spent in finding errors in my own programs."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black">-Maurice Wilkes, <i>
Memoirs of a Computer Pioneer</i></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">"Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect)" <smith.kennedy@hp.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, April 25, 2019 at 12:21 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Christopher Rizzo <Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com><br>
<b>Cc: </b>PWG Workgroup <ipp@pwg.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [IPP] PWG Last Call: IPP Authentication Methods (Ends 11 May 2019)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Hi Chris,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">[I dropped pwg-announce on this reply.]<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The link for the document we are reviewing is:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf</a> <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I just downloaded that and there are no redlines. Is this the URL you are reviewing? I'm not seeing any of the issues you are seeing in this document edition.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Smith Kennedy<br>
Wireless & Standards Architect - IPG-PPS<br>
Standards - IEEE ISTO PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum / USB-IF<br>
Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group<br>
HP Inc.<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Apr 25, 2019, at 1:00 PM, Rizzo, Christopher <<a href="mailto:Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com">Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Reviewed the marked up version, not sure how/where to get the unmarked version. Most of these comments are trivial grammar/syntax and<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Lines 229-230 on page 17 define a section 4 that has no content. Was this supposed to be bullet 2 in section 3.7?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt">Email:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com"><span style="color:purple">Christopher.Rizzo@xerox.com</span></a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt">-Maurice Wilkes,<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><i>Memoirs of a Computer Pioneer</i></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">From:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt">ipp <<a href="mailto:ipp-bounces@pwg.org">ipp-bounces@pwg.org</a>> on behalf of PWG Workgroup <<a href="mailto:ipp@pwg.org">ipp@pwg.org</a>><br>
<b>Reply-To:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>"Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect)" <<a href="mailto:smith.kennedy@hp.com">smith.kennedy@hp.com</a>><br>
<b>Date:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Tuesday, April 23, 2019 at 2:14 PM<br>
<b>To:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>"<a href="mailto:pwg-announce@pwg.org">pwg-announce@pwg.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:pwg-announce@pwg.org">pwg-announce@pwg.org</a>>, PWG Workgroup <<a href="mailto:ipp@pwg.org">ipp@pwg.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Re: [IPP] PWG Last Call: IPP Authentication Methods (Ends 11 May 2019)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Greetings all,<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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HP Inc.<br>
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[This PWG Last Call starts today, 11 April 2019, and ends Thursday, 11 May 2019 at 10pm US Pacific time.]<br>
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This is the formal announcement of the IPP Authentication Methods best practice document, located at:<br>
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<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/ZVqbC2kr5rfMZzyzSnvHV9?domain=ftp.pwg.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf</span></a><br>
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The IPP WG has completed extensive review of the various revisions of this document and two IPP WG last calls. The PWG has completed one last<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">call and all of the comments have been resolved in this new version.<o:p></o:p></p>
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The PWG Process/3.0 requires that a quorum of PWG members (30% or 8 members*) must acknowledge a PWG Last Call (with or without comments), before any document can progress to PWG Formal Vote. This PWG Last Call is NOT a Formal Vote but it DOES require your
review acknowledgment. The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is located at:<br>
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<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/ThT7C31v5vin9zNztqad3u?domain=pwg.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">https://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf</span></a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">* Many thanks to Google for becoming a PWG member!<o:p></o:p></p>
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HOW TO RESPOND<br>
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Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:<br>
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Subject: <Company Name> has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has [no] comments<br>
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WHERE TO SEND YOUR RESPONSE<br>
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Please do NOT simply reply to this note on the PWG-Announce list.<br>
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Please send your response to *all* of the following email addresses:<br>
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ipp at<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/8wKgC4xw7wuX9KkKiBV_kF?domain=pwg.org" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">pwg.org</span></a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>(IPP WG mailing list
- you must be subscribed!);<br>
smith.kennedy at<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/hvOoC5yx5xsBpLNLC2Nbti?domain=hp.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">hp.com</span></a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>(Smith Kennedy,
PWG Chair, IPP Authentication Methods editor)<br>
blueroofmusic at<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/N2vjC68y5yI50YwYCxwTcx?domain=gmail.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">gmail.com</span></a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>(Ira
McDonald, PWG Secretary, IPP WG Co-Chair)<br>
ptykod at<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/eUeeC73z5zuDV171HRQemg?domain=tykodi.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">tykodi.com</span></a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>(Paul Tykodi,
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msweet at<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/OaxvC82A5AhoPp4pizWy5i?domain=apple.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">apple.com</span></a><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>(Mike Sweet,
IPP WG Secretary)<br>
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Note: You must be subscribed to the IPP WG mailing list to send email to that list - otherwise your email will be silently discarded. You can subscribe to this list at:<br>
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IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br>
Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br>
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<a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/l89kCgJKgKTMwZQZS68T5T?domain=sites.google.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:#6600CC">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</span></a><br>
mailto:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank"><span style="color:purple">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</span></a><br>
PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434<o:p></o:p></p>
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