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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Sounds good. An "even newer initial draft" with all of Mike's suggested changes is coming soon to an FTP site near you...<div class=""><br class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Aug 28, 2018, at 1:54 PM, Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Hi Smith,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">In the interests of sanity, I suggest that you do the "furniture moving" that Mike</div><div class="">recommended with change tracking OFF and then we proceed forward from</div><div class="">there.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Cheers,</div><div class="">- Ira</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br class="">Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG<br class="">Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br class="">Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br class="">Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br class="">IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br class="">Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br class=""><a style="color:rgb(51,51,255)" href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/AjeJC2kr5rfkPgN9FnBIt7?domain=sites.google.com" target="_blank" class="">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</a><br class=""><a style="color:rgb(102,0,204)" href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/LLEjC31v5vim6O5EIqLitA?domain=sites.google.com" target="_blank" class="">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</a><br class="">mailto: <a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br class="">Jan-April: 579 Park Place Saline, MI 48176 734-944-0094<br class="">May-Dec: PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434<br class=""><br class=""><div style="display:inline" class=""></div><div style="display:inline" class=""></div><div style="display:inline" class=""></div><div class=""></div><div class=""></div><div class=""></div><div class=""></div></div></div></div></div></div><br class=""></div></div><br class=""><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="">On Tue, Aug 28, 2018 at 9:35 AM Michael Sweet <<a href="mailto:msweet@apple.com" class="">msweet@apple.com</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Smith,<br class="">
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I really appreciate you tackling this update! Apologies in advance for the length of this editorial feedback (going through the same thing myself with the 5100.5 update):<br class="">
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- Filename should be wd-ippjobprinterext2v20-yyyymmdd.ext<br class="">
- Title should be "IPP Job and Printer Extensions - Set 2 v2.0 (JPS2)<br class="">
- Abstract appears to be truncated and probably needs some editorial love.<br class="">
- The IPP workgroup boilerplate on page 4 should be removed (not in current template)<br class="">
- Global: Change all "type3 keyword" to "type2 keyword"<br class="">
- Global: Change "The 'foo' Something Something attribute" in the attribute descriptions to just "This attribute"<br class="">
- Section 4 appears to have the "4." in the title twice<br class="">
- Section 5 (REQUIRED OPERATIONS) should be moved after the attributes and renamed "New Operations" (for consistency with our current spec template)<br class="">
- Sections 6, 7, 9, and 10 should be brought under a new section 5 "New Attributes"<br class="">
- Section 5.1 Operation Attributes<br class="">
- Section 5.2 Job Description Attributes (or Job Status Attributes since job-save-printer-make-and-model appears to be set by the Printer during processing and thus should be READ ONLY)<br class="">
- Section 5.3 Job Template Attributes<br class="">
- Section 5.4 Printer Description Attributes<br class="">
- Section 8 (Additional Semantics) should come after Section 11 (Additional Values)<br class="">
- Add new Section 8.1: Get-Jobs: which-jobs to talk about new which-jobs values<br class="">
- Section 8.1: make section 8.2 Hold-Job: job-hold-until-time<br class="">
- Section 8.2: make section 8.3 Set-Job-Attributes: job-delay-output-until, job-delay-output-until-time, job-hold-until-time<br class="">
- Section 10.11 should be made a subsection of job-delay-output-until-time<br class="">
- Section 10.13 should be made a subsection of job-hold-until-time<br class="">
- Section 10.35 should be made a subsection of save-info<br class="">
- Section 10.40 should be made a subsection of save-name<br class="">
- Section 11: New Values for Existing Attributes (drop semantics here)<br class="">
- Section 11.1: Drop "Printer Description attribute" from title<br class="">
- Section 11.2: Just "which-jobs (type2 keyword)" - which-jobs-supported inherits everything from which-jobs<br class="">
- Section 11.3: Drop "Job Description attribute" from title<br class="">
- Section 11.3.x: Move to corresponding Job Template attribute definitions<br class="">
- Section 11.4: Delete (part of MSN2)<br class="">
- Section 11.5: Move to section 5.3 Job Template attributes under a new "media-col (collection) Extension" section.<br class="">
- Section 12: Just "IANA Considerations", we don't need the Semantic Model registration stuff anymore<br class="">
- Section 12: Should come after section 14 (Security Considerations)<br class="">
- Section 12.1: Attribute Registrations<br class="">
- Bring back the "Conformance Requirements" section (missing!) - it should go before the Internationalization Considerations section<br class="">
- Section 13: Drop UTR20 (not needed for IPP and no longer being maintained by the Unicode Consortium...) and make sure you don't lose the advisory text from the current WD template - UTR17, UTR23, and UTR33 are informational (non-normative) so the SHOULD is not appropriate.<br class="">
- Section 14: Use the standard boilerplate text for now. We'll probably want to add more once we settle on the final content.<br class="">
- Add an "Overview of Changes" section before the Change History section with an "IPP Job and Printer Extensions - Set 2 v2.0" subsection to provide a high-level list the changes in the v2.0 update.<br class="">
- Add a "Deprecated Attributes" section after the "New Values for Existing Attributes" section (empty for now)<br class="">
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Once we get closer to prototype I'll work with you on the registration templates - they'll need a significant amount of work... :/<br class="">
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> On Aug 28, 2018, at 8:06 AM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) <<a href="mailto:smith.kennedy@hp.com" target="_blank" class="">smith.kennedy@hp.com</a>> wrote:<br class="">
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> Greetings,<br class="">
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> I have posted a new "Initial Draft" of IPP Job and Printer Extensions Set 2 v2 (JPS2v2). This was created using the published final PDF draft to ensure a start from the wording that was finalized. I have made a number of editorial changes that are all preserved in the -rev version in case there are objections. The primary set of changes involved moving all the Printer Description attributes out of sub-sections of the "Job Template" section to the "Printer Description Attributes" section.<br class="">
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> <a rel="noreferrer" href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/6KekC4xw7wuJMqpviBg-cA?domain=ftp.pwg.org" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobprinterext20-20180828.docx</a><br class="">
> <a rel="noreferrer" href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/GMmTC5yx5xs052VDs24Grc?domain=ftp.pwg.org" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobprinterext20-20180828.pdf</a><br class="">
> <a rel="noreferrer" href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/a2XdC68y5yIojqnBsxw5LI?domain=ftp.pwg.org" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobprinterext20-20180828-rev.docx</a><br class="">
> <a rel="noreferrer" href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/6uxyC73z5zum4wOJIRN4g1?domain=ftp.pwg.org" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobprinterext20-20180828-rev.pdf</a><br class="">
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> I propose using this as our starting point, but please chime in if you don't like how this was produced. I will separately post slides to facilitate discussion about the changes HP would like to see in JPS2v2.<br class="">
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> Cheers,<br class="">
> Smith<br class="">
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> Smith Kennedy<br class="">
> Wireless & Standards Architect - IPG-PPS<br class="">
> Standards - IEEE ISTO PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum / USB-IF<br class="">
> Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group<br class="">
> HP Inc.<br class="">
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