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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">Done! <div><br></div><div>I know I keep promising new updates and then delaying. I've already edited a bunch of things since the recent revision I've posted and I'm trying to maintain momentum to get another revision available by early next week.</div><div><br><div>
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<br><div><div>On 2013-09-24, at 10:08 AM, Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>></div><div> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=Windows-1252"><div dir="ltr"><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div><div>Hi Smith,<br><br></div>The document title word order should be changed from:<br><br>"IPP/2.0 Implementer’s Guide"<br></div>- which implies that it applies ONLY to IPP/2.0 protocol version<br>
</div><br>to:<br><br>"IPP Implementor’s Guide v2.0"<br></div>- which implies that it spans all IPP protocol versions and updates<br></div> the previous RFC 3196<br></div><div>- note that the final syllable should be spelled w/ an 'o' rather than<br>
</div><div> the incorrect 'e' (notwithstanding MS Word's illiterate dictionary)<br></div><div> to match the title of RFC 3196<br><br></div>Also, the abstract says it's for IPP/2.0 which is NOT correct (it<br>
</div>also applies to IPP/1.1, IPP/2.1 and IPP/2.2 protocol versions).<br></div>Should change from:<br><br>"This document updates and extends RFC 3196 for IPP/2.0."<br><br></div>to:<br><br>"This document updates and extends RFC 3196 for all IPP protocol <br>
versions."<br><div><div><br></div><div>Cheers,<br></div><div>- Ira<br><br></div><div><br clear="all"><div><div>Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>
Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG<br>Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG<br>Chair - TCG Embedded Systems Hardcopy SG<br>IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br>
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