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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>><WW>< The MFD Model, for which we did spend a lot of time on terminology (although there are some errors yet) defined User in terms of “</span><span style='font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Users include the Administrators, Job Owners, Operators, members of the Job Owner's group and other authenticated entities.” Perhaps unclear with respect to automata, but I don’t think it was intended to include that. My objection to User was that the actor in the specific use cases was a very particular type of user: that is, a potential job requester. So the proper names seems more reasonable to use, at least in a narrative type use case presentation. But I would prefer to use User than come up with some other general term; we could clarify the MFD model term to specifically exclude automata.><WW><</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> Bill Wagner<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> ipp-bounces@pwg.org [mailto:ipp-bounces@pwg.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Michael Sweet<br><b>Sent:</b> Sunday, September 23, 2012 12:34 AM<br><b>To:</b> ipp@pwg.org<br><b>Subject:</b> [IPP] Feedback on some of the feedback...<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal>Some feedback/questions about the feedback from the last IPP WG concall:<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal>GP28: Section 3.2.2: The Client queries the printer, not the User. – The term User can refer to both a person or to Automata. We need to select a different term to refer to actions only undertaken by people (not Automata) in the use cases.<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><br><br>GP30: Section 3.2.2.x: "Jane" instead of "User"? – Same issue to be resolved as item GP 28.<br><br>GP39: Section 3.2.2.4: "provides a preview" instead of "displays a preview"<br><br>REJECTED: We're talking about the user interface, not the implementation details. –<br><br>Because we are talking about a user interface for people, we need to resolve the same issue as GP28 and GP30.<br><br><span class=apple-tab-span> </span>I would prefer to drop "automata" from the User definition; the alternative is to<o:p></o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal> start using Person (and Person Interface?) which is just awkward.<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal>GP70: Section 4.2.3.1: Expand "air" to "auth-info-required (air)" – air is a word with a standard definition. Where we are using the term as an abbreviation, the use of “air” in this entry needs further clarification.<br><br><span class=apple-tab-span> </span>"air" is never used as an abbreviation, and I am inclined to remove the whole<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-tab-span> </span>historical reference to CUPS since it is just confusing people more than "why is<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-tab-span> </span>it called "air"...<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><br>GP95: Section 6.1: Change "Figures 2 through 5" to "Figures 2 through Figure 5"? – change to read "Figure 2 through Figure 5"<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-tab-span> </span>My Chicago Manual of Style is still in a box somewhere, and the only online reference<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-tab-span> </span>I've found for this is the American Psychology Society's style manual which says to<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-tab-span> </span>use "Figures 2-5".<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"'>__________________________________________________<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"'>Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><br>-- <br>This message has been scanned for viruses and <br>dangerous content by <a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/"><b>MailScanner</b></a>, and is <br>believed to be clean. <o:p></o:p></p></div><br />--
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