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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'>I have been doing some detailed work with some of the pwg candidate
standards and, to date, I have noted the following.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'>5100.5 has an incorrect table of contents but ok in PDF.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'>5100.5 still has change information in the word doc<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'>5100.5 Sec: 9.1.13 reference 5100.7 Sec: 4.2.4; there is
no 5100.7 Sec: 4.2.4!<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'> I
believe it should reference 5100.7 Sec: <a name="_Toc71082031"></a><a
name="_Toc53897761"></a><a name="_Ref30528382">3.2.5.3 document-source-os-name
(name(40))</a><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'> 5100.7
states the OS name must be lowercase; however, the IANA <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><font size=3
face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>registry (<a
href="http://www.iana.org/assignments/operating-system-names/operating-system-names.xml">http://www.iana.org/assignments/operating-system-names/operating-system-names.xml</a>)<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.5in;text-indent:.5in'><font size=3
face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>state the names
must be uppercase.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'> ????
What is used by PWG ????<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'>5100.7 still has change information in the word doc<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'>5100.7 Sec. 3.2.2 reference rfc2911 section 3.1.4.14; I
believe the correction section is 13.1.4.14<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
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