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Hi,<br><br>[For final review during the IPP WG session this Wednesday at the PWG F2F]<br><br><br>The summary of all written comments received during the PWG Last Call of the <br>
PWG IPP Version 2.0 Second Edition specification, with the disposition of each <br>comment, is posted at:<br><br> <a style="color: rgb(51, 51, 255);" href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/ipp20-last-call-comment-resolution-20101206.txt" target="_blank">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/ipp20-last-call-comment-resolution-20101206.txt</a><br>
<br>I've just posted a Stable draft of PWG IPP Version 2.0 Second Edition, ready for<br>review at the IPP session this Wednesday during the upcoming PWG F2F:<br>
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<a style="color: rgb(51, 51, 153);" href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/lcrc-ipp20-20101206.pdf" target="_blank">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/lcrc-ipp20-20101206.pdf</a><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 153);"> </span>/ doc<br>
- clean copy with line numbers and hot links in TOC<br>
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<a style="color: rgb(51, 51, 153);" href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/lcrc-ipp20-20101206-rev.pdf" target="_blank">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/lcrc-ipp20-20101206-rev.pdf</a><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 153);"> </span>/ doc<br>
- redlines with line numbers and hot links in TOC<br>
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This draft addresses all of the comments from the PWG Last Call and the detailed<br>review during the IPP WG teleconference on 29 November 2010.<br>
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Comments?<br>
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Cheers,<br>
- Ira<br clear="all">-----------------------------------<br>
<p class="MsoBodyTextIndent" style="margin-left: 0.0866in; text-indent: -0.25in;"><b><span style=""><span style="">A.<span style="font: 7pt "Times New Roman";"> </span></span></span></b><b>Changes
made to create 6 December 2010 version (Stable Draft)</b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;">Editorial – Kept status at Stable
Draft<span style=""> – PWG
Last Call changes</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style=""><br></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">Editorial – Revised section 6.2 (IPP/2.0),
6.3 (IPP/2.1), and 6.4 (IPP/2.2) to <br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">change parentheses around “unless
otherwise…” to leading/trailing commas <br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">as this clause is normative, per IPP WG review</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style=""><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">Editorial – Revised section 6.3 (IPP/2.1) to
change “collection attributes” to <br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">“attributes” in note 1 and correct reference
to “PWG-5100.3” in note 2, per <br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">IPP WG review</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style=""><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">Editorial – Revised section 6.4 (IPP/2.2)
table 9 to correct flow off bottom of <br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">page, per IPP WG review</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style=""><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">Editorial – Revised section 6.4 (IPP/2.2)
table 9 and added note 8 for <br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">“document-xxx” attributes in Document object (as
opposed to Job object in <br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left: 0.0866in;"><span style="">section 6.3), per Gail Giansiracusa</span></p>
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