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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Hi All,</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Just a few editorial comments...</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Section 4.1: <BR>- RFC2246 is not listed in this section but it is listed in Table 1 as RECOMMENDED</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Section 4.2: <BR>- RFC4346 is listed in Section 4.1 but not again in 4.2 even though it is listed in Table 1 as RECOMMENDED for both v2.0 and v2.1 (and v2.2). I would suggest that RFC4346 be listed again in 4.2. (RECOMMENDED RFC5107.2 is listed in section 4.1 and again in section 4.2.)<BR>- RFC2246 is not listed in this section but is listed in Table 1 as RECOMMENDED</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><BR><FONT face=Arial size=2>Section 4.3: <BR>- RFC5100.7 is already listed as REQUIRED in 4.2. Why is listed again here? It should be pulled in by default from line 334 "</FONT><FONT face=Arial size=2><EM>An IPP/2.2 printer MUST support the IETF or PWG specifications defined for IPP/2.1 plus the following</EM>"</FONT><BR><FONT face=Arial size=2>- I would suggest that RFC4346 be listed again in 4.3 (Still Recommended)<BR>- RFC2246 is not listed in this section but is listed in Table 1 as RECOMMENDED</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Section 6.2:<BR>- Note 7 is not indented.</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><BR><FONT face=Arial size=2>RFC5100.7 is stated as required in section 4.2 and Table 1. However, there are at least two attributes, "document-name-supplied" and <BR>"document-format-supplied" which are REQUIRED in RFC5100.7 but not listed in Table 8. They are listed in Table 9. So, what does "MUST support" mean in Sections 4.1 thru 4.3? </FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Gail Giansiracusa</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=Arial size=2>Kyocera Mita </FONT></DIV>
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