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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Joe –<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Here are my comments against the Aug 6<sup>th</sup> draft of the IDS Model document for today’s meeting:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>1.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 3.2.11, line 392, page 13: I think the sentence should read “… to which he has access through his mobile device, but the destination printer does not have access to the document.”<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 4.5, line 565, page 18: This section and elsewhere in the document reference the IEEE 2600 series of standards. However, none of them are included in the list of references in Section 13.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 6.1, lines 615-620, page 20: I may be wrong here, but I think grammatically the ‘and’ before ‘supported communication protocols and encryption’ and before ‘the physical location of the device’ should both be removed.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>4.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 6.2, line 624, page 20: The reference is to [OASIS], but Section 13.2 lists this reference as [OASIS1].<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>5.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 7, line 661, page 21: I think the ‘IN’ in the definition of Visible should be ‘in’.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>6.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 7, page 21: I agree with Randy Turner’s comment that these Visibility definitions are confusing. If they are needed I would put some examples or show the hierarchy of the terms graphically so it’s clearer to the reader what these terms are referring to and what they mean.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>7.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 8, Table 1, page 22: In the ‘Administrator’ row the reference to ‘P2600’ should be to either IEEE Std 2600-2008 or to one of the four other IEEE 2600 standards (P2600 was the Working Group, not the standard).<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoListParagraph style='margin-left:.25in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span style='color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>8.<span style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 11, line 730, page 25: The section includes the [ISO10646] reference, but this reference is not listed in Section 13.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'>Alan<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> ids-bounces@pwg.org [mailto:ids-bounces@pwg.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Murdock, Joe<br><b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 06, 2012 10:48 PM<br><b>To:</b> ids@pwg.org<br><b>Subject:</b> [IDS] Updated IDS Model document posted<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-ids-model10-20120806-rev.pdf">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-ids-model10-20120806-rev.pdf</a> <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-ids-model10-20120806.pdf">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-ids-model10-20120806.pdf</a> <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>---------------------------------------<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Joe Murdock<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Principal Engineer and Researcher<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Chair IEEE/ISTO Printer Working Group Imaging Device Security<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Sharp Labs of America<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>5750 NW Pacific Rim Blvd<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Camas, WA 98607<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>(360) 817-7542<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'><a href="mailto:jmurdock@sharplabs.com">jmurdock@sharplabs.com</a><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif"'><br>-- <br>This message has been scanned for viruses and <br>dangerous content by <a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/"><b>MailScanner</b></a>, and is <br>believed to be clean. <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><br />--
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