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<html><head><base href="x-msg://475/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">I like the flow of this version much better. Some quick notes:<div><br></div><div>1. Page 2 - Remediation: "In most NAC systems" instead of "Is most NAC systems"?</div><div>2. Page 3 - Maybe make Network Access Protocols content into three non-bulleted paragraphs, and then list the vendors for each protocol rather than separating them?</div><div><br></div><div><div><div>On Oct 29, 2010, at 5:52 PM, Murdock, Joe wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; font-family: Helvetica; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size: medium; "><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; "><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">The next draft of the MPSA article has been posted. Let me know if I on the right track..<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/white/MPSA-Hardcopy-Security-Article-draft-3.docx" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/white/MPSA-Hardcopy-Security-Article-draft-3.docx</a><o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/white/MPSA-Hardcopy-Security-Article-draft-3.pdf" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/white/MPSA-Hardcopy-Security-Article-draft-3.pdf</a><o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; ">---------------------------------------<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; ">Joe Murdock<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; ">Principal Engineer and Researcher<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; ">Co-Chair IEEE/ISTO Printer Working Group Imaging Device Security<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; ">Sharp Labs of America<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; ">5750 NW Pacific Rim Blvd<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; ">Camas, WA 98607<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; ">(360) 817-7542<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="font-size: 9pt; "><a href="mailto:jmurdock@sharplabs.com" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; "><span style="color: blue; ">jmurdock@sharplabs.com</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><br>--<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>This message has been scanned for viruses and<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>dangerous content by<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; "><b>MailScanner</b></a>, and is<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>believed to be clean.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>_______________________________________________<br>ids mailing list<br><a href="mailto:ids@pwg.org" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">ids@pwg.org</a><br><a href="https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/ids" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/ids</a><br></div></span></blockquote></div><br><div>
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