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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Michael,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Thanks for comments. Arrows fixed, I'll remove the first four operations and add the <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>starting state in the descriptive paragraph. Also the change you suggested will become:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>The Printer is already registered in the Cloud and the Client is associated with the Cloud Print Service.</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>All,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Since the Cloud Print Manager initiates the communication with the Cloud Print Service, should there be a sequence drawing for initial communications? I could see this also as part of the Imaging model, where the configurations and capabilities for the other services are sent to the appropriate cloud service.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Larry<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Michael Sweet [mailto:msweet@apple.com] <br><b>Sent:</b> Thursday, December 06, 2012 2:33 PM<br><b>To:</b> larryupthegrove<br><b>Cc:</b> cloud@pwg.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [Cloud] Updating cloud printing sequence diagrams to an improved format<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Larry,<o:p></o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal>On 2012-12-06, at 5:12 PM, larryupthegrove <<a href="mailto:larryupthegrove@comcast.net">larryupthegrove@comcast.net</a>> wrote:<o:p></o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><br><br><o:p></o:p></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/cloud/white/Cloud Print Sequence drawing revision 12_6.vsd"><span style='color:purple'>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/cloud/white/Cloud Print Sequence drawing revision 12_6.vsd</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/cloud/white/Cloud Print Sequence drawing revision 12_6.pdf"><span style='color:purple'>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/cloud/white/Cloud Print Sequence drawing revision 12_6.pdf</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I redid the initial sequence drawing to incorporate the suggestions and discussions from the 12/5 face to face meeting.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I would appreciate feedback or suggestions before I update all the other sequence drawings.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal>I like the new format, although I would stick with the same arrow head style for all of the lines representing requests.<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>As for the specific content, you probably don't want to show the initial four Update operations on the Cloud Print Manager side. If you *do* show it, the timeline should be broken up and the UpdatePrintJobState and UpdatePrintDocumentState operations removed since, on startup, the Cloud Print Manager will just send UpdatePrintServiceState and UpdateFetchablePrintJobs to reset things to a known state. UpdatePrintJobState and UpdatePrintDocumentState would only be called for jobs that were being processed during a prior run.<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>I am also going to add a descriptive paragraph for each sequence drawing. For the revised drawing:<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>This sequence drawing represents the operations for a print submittal which contains a single document. <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>No errors occur in the document or in the print processing.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>The Printer is already registered in the Cloud and the User is associated with the Cloud Print Service.<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></blockquote><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal>I think you mean "The Client is associated" since you don't show the User in the diagram, right?<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><br><br><o:p></o:p></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Thanks for any suggestions!<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Larry<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'> <o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Helvetica","sans-serif"'><br>--<span class=apple-converted-space> </span><br>This message has been scanned for viruses and<span class=apple-converted-space> </span><br>dangerous content by<span class=apple-converted-space> </span><a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/"><b><span style='color:purple'>MailScanner</span></b></a>, and is<span class=apple-converted-space> </span><br>believed to be clean. _______________________________________________<br>cloud mailing list<br><a href="mailto:cloud@pwg.org"><span style='color:purple'>cloud@pwg.org</span></a><br><a href="https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/cloud"><span style='color:purple'>https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/cloud</span></a><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><span class=apple-style-span>________________________________________________________________________</span><br><span class=apple-style-span>Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair</span><br><br><o:p></o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></div><br />--
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