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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"><base href="x-msg://669/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div><br></div>Hi guys,<div><br></div><div>some notes regarding the recently published cloud model document:</div><div><br></div><div>-------------</div><div>Sorry to be a broken record here, but isn't section 3.5 just a repeat of our desire to follow the semantic model with regards to printer operations? Seems like a statement saying:</div><div><br></div><div>The following operations from the PWG semantic model [REF] are required for cloud printing</div><div><br></div><div>1.</div><div>2.</div><div>3.</div><div>etc.</div><div><br></div><div>From an earlier email exchange between Mike and I, it seems like everything just "works the same" from the "client requirements" perspective.</div><div><br></div><div>--------------</div><div><br></div><div>Section 4.1 - Are the terms "User" and "Client" defined this way in other PWG docs? Probably should be. We should have a separate document that defines terminology for all PWG docs, and put these in it (if we don't already)</div><div><br></div><div>If we already have these defined, then we should probably just reference them in 4.1</div><div><br></div><div>--------------</div><div><br></div><div>Section 4.2.1 - Sequence diagrams can either be "abstract" or "concrete protocol" diagrams. I can't tell which this is.</div><div>With the reference to user credentials being one way (no challenge) and the labels "status, access token", it seems like this is somewhat suggestive of a concrete sequence diagram. Abstract sequence diagrams are usually NOT normative; they're typically informative, so are we trying to "suggest" something with these diagrams?</div><div><br></div><div>---------------</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>R.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br><div><div>On Oct 1, 2012, at 4:04 PM, "larryupthegrove" <<a href="mailto:larryupthegrove@comcast.net">larryupthegrove@comcast.net</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple" style="font-family: Helvetica; font-size: medium; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; "><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; "><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">I made the updates and corrections from today’s meeting.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/cloud/wd/wd-cloudmodel10-20121002.pdf" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/cloud/wd/wd-cloudmodel10-20121002.pdf</a><o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/cloud/wd/wd-cloudmodel10-20121002.docx" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/cloud/wd/wd-cloudmodel10-20121002.docx</a><o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Items I would appreciate feedback and/or suggestions.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.75in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; text-indent: -0.25in; "><span>1.<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span> Two additional sequence diagrams.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 1.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; text-indent: -0.25in; "><span>a.<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>Config change – seems it should be very short, I was going to add short paragraph adding some descriptive text on covering both soft and hard (tray) changes.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 1.25in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; text-indent: -0.25in; "><span>b.<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>Exception handling – could result in aborting the job, or updating client status and waiting. Should I try to show both?<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.75in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; text-indent: -0.25in; "><span>2.<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; "> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span>Any updates to reference documents that should be included.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">My cleanup effort on the Visio sequence drawings needs another pass to make it look better, as well as getting the figures into the table of contents.<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; ">Larry<o:p></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><o:p> </o:p></div></div><br>--<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>This message has been scanned for viruses and<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>dangerous content by<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; "><b>MailScanner</b></a>, and is<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br>believed to be clean. _______________________________________________<br>cloud mailing list<br><a href="mailto:cloud@pwg.org" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">cloud@pwg.org</a><br><a href="https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/cloud" style="color: purple; text-decoration: underline; ">https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/cloud</a><br></div></blockquote></div><br></div><br />--
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