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<font size=2 face="sans-serif">Hi Pete,</font>
<br>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">I have no further comments for the version
20120117 in addition to those posted already.</font>
<br>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Here are the comments against the new
updated version (20120227) today:</font>
<br>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 373-376 - It's not clear "a
protocol" here is what protocol. Readers need to do a lot of
guessing here. It's any printing protocol? Or only a protocol for
cloud printing?</font>
<br>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 360 - Please also reference the
section number in RFC291 here - much easier for readers not familiar
with IPP to find.</font>
<br>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 413 - Figure 7 caption still labels
this element as "InsertSheet Datatype". Same problem with
Figures 9 -12, and Figures 15, 17-23.</font>
<br>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 521 - It's not clear "that
element" here means the PageRanges PrintJobTicket element or a vendor
extension that controls this feature. Please reword.</font>
<br>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Thanks,</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Nancy<br>
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Nancy Chen<br>
Principal Engineer<br>
Solutions and Technology<br>
Services and Solution Business - US<br>
Oki Data<br>
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.<br>
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054<br>
Phone: (856)222-7006<br>
Email: Nancy.Chen@okidata.com</font>
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