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<form action="http://commcenter.attbi.com/wmc/v/wm?cmd=ListManage&sid=c0" method=post><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Voting
is open for Formal Approval of the PWG Proposed Standard IPP "-actual"
attributes. Last call was completed successfully (see below). I was trying
to wait for the PWG process update before announcing this vote but I feel
the process revision will take longer than anticipated. As the new process
is currently defined, this document would become Candidate Standard. </font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Send votes to the ISTO in care of Ami
Patel and copy the PWG Chairman, Harry Lewis. Just a reminder - one vote
per company.</font>
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<br><a href=a.s.patel@ieee.org><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif">a.s.patel@ieee.org</font></a>
<br><a href=harryl@us.ibm.com><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif">harryl@us.ibm.com</font></a>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Voting ends at 5pm EST on March 7.</font>
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Harry Lewis </font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Chairman - ISTO Printer Working Group<br>
IBM Printing Systems <br>
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<br><font size=1 color=#800080 face="sans-serif">----- Forwarded by Harry
Lewis/Boulder/IBM on 02/14/2003 11:08 AM -----</font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif"><b>Dennis Carney</b></font>
<p><font size=1 face="sans-serif">01/31/2003 04:09 PM</font>
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<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif"> To:
Harry Lewis/Boulder/IBM@IBMUS</font>
<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif"> cc:
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<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif"> From:
Dennis Carney/Boulder/IBM@IBMUS</font>
<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif"> Subject:
Re: PWG-ANNOUNCE> Last Call Exit
for PWG Proposed Standard IPP "-actual" attributes</font><a href=Notes:///8525638E00750154/A24CF79FA927570285256356005827C4/7AD5DFAD4EC9F8C287256CBE007C4504>Link</a></table>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Harry,</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">I have posted the new version of the
"-actual" spec, the one that is ready to be voted on.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/new_ACT/pwg-ipp-actual-attrs-v04-030131-rev.doc</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/new_ACT/pwg-ipp-actual-attrs-v04-030131-rev.pdf</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/new_ACT/pwg-ipp-actual-attrs-v04-030131.doc</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/new_ACT/pwg-ipp-actual-attrs-v04-030131.pdf</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/new_ACT/pwg-ipp-actual-attrs-latest.doc</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/new_ACT/pwg-ipp-actual-attrs-latest.pdf</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">So I guess we can start the vote whenever
you'd like.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Dennis</font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif"><b>Harry Lewis/Boulder/IBM@IBMUS</b></font>
<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Sent by: owner-pwg-announce@pwg.org</font>
<p><font size=1 face="sans-serif">01/30/03 03:32 PM</font>
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<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif"> To:
pwg-announce@pwg.org</font>
<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif"> cc:
Dennis Carney/Boulder/IBM@IBMUS</font>
<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif"> Subject:
PWG-ANNOUNCE> Last Call Exit for
PWG Proposed Standard IPP "-actual" attributes</font>
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Per the PWG process, LAST CALL for the </font><font size=2 face="Arial">Printer
Working Group Proposed Standard for Internet Printing Protocol (IPP):"-actual"
attributes has expired today, Jan 30, 2003 at </font><font size=2 face="sans-serif">2200
GMT (5pm in NYC). After incorporating comments from the last call, a VOTE
will determine formal approval for moving this document to PROPOSED status
as currently defined by the PWG standards track. </font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><br>
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You can find the last call versions at</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
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ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/new_ACT/pwg-ipp-actual-attrs-v03-021216.pdf<br>
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/new_ACT/pwg-ipp-actual-attrs-v03-021216.doc</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><br>
</font><font size=2 face="sans-serif"><br>
Prior to voting these links will be updated with a revised document that
incorporates the last call comments. These comments, and their resolution
are listed, below. All comments received were editorial in nature.</font><font size=2 face="Courier New"><br>
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1. RFC 2565 and 2566 are obsolete. It is not appropriate to reference
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obsolete documents, especially as a normative reference. See<br>
Line 146 (in section 1 Introduction)<br>
Line 228 (in section 3 -actual attributes)<br>
Line 331 - 336 (in section 7.1 Normative References</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
RESOLUTION</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"> </font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
- Changed abstract from <br>
"...extension to the Internet Printing Protocol/1.0 (IPP/1.0) [RFC2566,
RFC2565] & IPP/1.1 [RFC2911, RFC2910]..." <br>
to <br>
"...extension to the Internet Printing Protocol (IPP) (RFC2911, RFC2910)...".</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
- Changed first line of Introduction from</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
"This document specifies an extension to the Internet Printing Protocol/1.0
(IPP) [RFC2565, RFC2566] and IPP/1.1 [RFC2910, RFC2911].</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
to</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"> </font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
"This document specifies an extension to the Internet Printing Protocol
(IPP) [RFC2911, RFC2910].</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"> </font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
- Added new 3rd paragraph in Introduction:</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
"This extension is applicable to IPP/1.0 and IPP/1.1, as well as all
future IPP/1.x versions."</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
- On line 159, changed from:</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
"In IPP/1.0 and IPP/1.1, it is..."</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
to</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"> </font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
"In IPP, it is..."</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
- On line 228, changed from:</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
"...in the IPP Model [RFC2566, RFC2911], ..."</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
to</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"> </font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
"...in the IPP Model [RFC2911], ..."</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
- Moved references to 2565 and 2566 (lines 331-336) from Normative References
to new Informative References section (section 7.2).</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman">
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</font><font size=2 face="Courier New"><br>
2. In lines 151 & 152 recommend changing "(or are going to print)"
to<br>
"(or are expected to be printed)" to be more consistent
with the<br>
example in section 3.3.</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif">
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RESOLUTION <br>
Done</font><font size=2 face="Courier New"><br>
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3. In line 239 remove "that has the" and all of the text in the<br>
following line. This additional text adds nothing and results
in<br>
a sentence that is very difficult to read.</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif">
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RESOLUTION</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"> </font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
Done</font>
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4. In lines 279 and 280 there is a strange split (by WORD) of the <br>
string "-attribute".</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif">
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RESOLUTION</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"> </font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
Fixed</font><font size=2 face="Courier New"><br>
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5. The formatting of the document is not per ISTO requirements.<br>
Specifically page numbering and headers. Is there a procedure<br>
for format review prior to final publication? I propose that<br>
this needs to be established.</font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif">
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RESOLUTION</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"> </font><font size=2 color=blue face="sans-serif"><br>
Keeping current formatting for now until new template efforts stabilize.</font><font size=3 face="Times New Roman"><br>
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Harry Lewis <br>
Chairman - ISTO Printer Working Group<br>
IBM Printing Systems <br>
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