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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'>Hello All,<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'>I have the following questions and/or concerns about the
latest Scan Service Requirements document. <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'>“Network Scan Service use Cases and Requirements”
January 31, 2008.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'>Comments beyond typo and editing corrections<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
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<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>The current definition for the
term “Scan Document” does not actually state is contains the scanned
digital document itself. It states that it contains the “Scan Document
Information”. <o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
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<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>If this is true, then the term
“Digital Document” definition becomes; “The digitized
data of the Hardcopy Document.”<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>If this is true, then the term
“Scan Document Data” definition becomes:“The digitized
data of the Hardcopy Document. This term is used interchangeable
with Digital Document throughout this document.”<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
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<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>The term “Template
Manager Service” has contained in its definition the wording “
… the interfaces for creating, …maintaining”
. I need clarification of the terms “interfaces”,
“creating” and “maintaining”. Does the word “interfaces”
mean the Application Programming Interfaces (APIs) or does it mean the
user (gui/line-commands/etc) interfaces; I believe it is means APIs
but which is the intent? The word creating has the same implication
of a GUI or user-interface. However, it may have meant “to
create a new template”. I would contend that the “Template
Manager Service” would provide the services of store and retrieve
only. To create a new template, the Scan Client would get an
existing template or the default template by a retrieve command to the “Template
Manager Service”; the user would modify the retrieve template; the
Scan Client would then request the “Template Manager Service”
to store the modified template under a new name. Thus, the “Template
Manager Service” only performs store and retrieve. As
for the word “maintaining”, what does this mean? What is
being “maintained”?<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>In the definition for “Scan
Job Receipt”, is the lower-case word “element” meant to
be the “XML term” “Element”. If not, I would
suggest changing the word “element” to remove ambiguity with
the XML term “Element”. Would the word “attribute”
be better? If the term “element” means “Element”,
then it needs to be capitalized.<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Should the term “Scan
Service Discovery” be added to section 3.2 as term?<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>For Use Case 2:<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
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<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>I admit to being confused at
this point. I thought we were going to eliminate the first
paragraph of the use-case. I though this was going to be
simple use-case of “Walk up Scanning using an existing Scan Job
Template” and not “Walk up Scanning using a pre-defined Scan
Job Template”. Thus, if this is the former case, the
first paragraph can be removed. The discussion we had over
the phone was that an IT-department would restrict the user by having a
scan client that would not allow restricted fields to be set.<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>The word “boundaries”
should be changed, since in scanning boundaries will imply the physical scanning
area and not boundaries (in pages) between documents.<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l1 level2 lfo1'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>This use-case has what I call “Implied
Requirements” or “Inferred Requirements” that can not
be directly identified by the use-case or the processing steps. For
example, Design Req: 2.6 “Must Honor” is not even
hinted at in the use-case or the processing steps but this does seem to
be the use-case to include it. (We could expand the pervious use-case to
discuss these kinds of details.) What I would suggest and
have done in my own work is to have a requirements section called “Implied
Requirement” as a separate section of the design requirements.
These requirements that are not directly identifiable by the use-case but
are “under the covers” or that “must be included”
to make the use-case be functional. Therefore I would like to
suggest the following document modification<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
</ol>
</ol>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>6.2.2 Requirements<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'> 6.2.2.1 Precondition
Requirements<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'> Precondition
Req: 2.1 The Scan Client SHALL use the Scan Service Directory
requirements of section 6.7<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'> 6.2.2.2 Design
Requirements<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'> Design
Req: 2.1 …………………….<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:99.0pt'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:2.0in;text-indent:-.5in;mso-list:l0 level4 lfo2'><![if !supportLists]><font
size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'><span
style='mso-list:Ignore'>6.2.2.3<font size=1 face="Times New Roman"><span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></font></span></span></font><![endif]><font
size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Implied Requirements<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:2.0in'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Implied Req: 2.1 The Scan Service
SHALL support a “Must Honor” ………………<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.25in'><font size=2 face=Arial><span
style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'>More later…<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'>Glen<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'> <o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><font size=2 face=Arial><span style='font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Arial'><o:p> </o:p></span></font></p>
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